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Without spoilers or trying to tell you how to write a story, I do think you're in danger here of doing the same thing with MNF - not keeping your eye on the ending, and not making difficult choices to move the story forward. The story was gripping, the choices felt a little more meaningful than they did in MNF(which I understand was by design), the characters felt more well-rounded and I felt like this story is actually going somewhere - AND that you actually know where that is. MNM hit me in the ballsack almost immediately and kept punching. MNM indicates that you've grown tremendously as a writer, and you've really got your hands around this project. It's meandering, it doesn't feel like the story is going anywhere, a lot of otherwise interesting characters feel tacked on and totally extraneous - to their own detriment and the detriment of the story - and it feels less like a story than a collection of events described flatly.
I honestly almost quit MNF in the first 30 minutes, but ended up getting hooked enough to play through the content that was available at that time(I want to say this was around spring this year). I have to be honest, I'm in a weird place with MNF. This was good enough that I feel compelled to say something. That was just my nitpicking side, sorry, but the overall game was enjoyable, and can't wait to read more in the future. Maybe the developer wants to do that in the future but doesn't have the time for it rn, who knows? I know he has a short moment with Bethany at the hospital and that one time during breakfast, but it does feel strange how unbothered he is with his mother as if she is not an important role in his life compared to his daughters and sisters. You would think if you have amnesia, you wanna know more about yourself and the people that raise you to be the person you are today. A bit of nitpicking when it comes to this story is the fact that the protagonist doesn't really try to get to know his parents. The monologue that the protagonist has about his situation can distract you long enough. Not as much sexual content as the rest but that's fine. But I gotta say, the game was quite good. Maybe it's just another VN I looked once that find interest. If you like this game and want to receive access to Beta versions etc, consider becoming a Patron!Ĭame for the.I don't remember actually. I post progress updates every monday for both my games in the My New Family devblog to not spam you guys too much. A Story-Rich Visual Novel that includes character interactions, development and extremely wholesome moments.
Will you embrace this side of your life or will the morality that you didn't care for before your accident come back? You can decide everything yourself. On your journey to finding New Memories you will uncover things that seem unspeakable to you moments you experienced with your wife that are of a more precarious nature. Through circumstances that you don't yet understand, she appears in your dreams, showing you things from your past life that you forgot. Your wife, who was also involved in the car accident, has fallen into a coma. Your family is there to slowly help you back into your life. You wake up in a hospital, confused and lost with no idea how you landed there. In My New Memories you play a (male) character that lost his memories after a terrible car accident. But what happens if you forget who you are? If you don't remember anything? Then you can only hope that the people that do know who you are help you out.This is your journey.On your way to finding new memories. Memories.One of the most important things in our lives.